Succubus (Neutral Killing)

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Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby TazmanianBrit » Tue Sep 06, 2016 1:39 pm

Name: Succubus

Alignment: Neutral Killing

Abilities: Visit people to seduce them. After 1 night they are killed.

Attributes:

- Escorts, Consorts and Role Block immune town members are unaffected by the Succubus
- You can't seduce another person if somebody has already been seduced.
- Seduction kills pierce Night immunity

Special Attributes:

- Immune to roleblocks
- Unique
- Immune to attacks at night

Goal: Kill all who oppose you

Win Conditions: Win with Witches and Survivors. Kill everyone else

Investigative Results:

Investigator - Consort, Escort, Transporter or Succubus
Sherriff - Your target is a succubus
Consigliere - Your target is a seductive demon. They must be a Succubus

Additional Information:

Seducing also role blocks the target

Succubus Prompts

- You have successfully seduced your target
- Your target is immune (if trying to seduce)

Target Prompts

- Somebody occupied your night, you have been roleblocked
- You could not resist the seductive power of the Succubus. You have been killed.
- Somebody tried to roleblock you but you are immune


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I feel like neutral needed a sort of role blocking role so it wouldn't be too easy to confirm Escort/Consort so I tried to figure out a way to make it Neutral Evil in a way. I do know that supernatural creatures (e.g vamp and ww) are in game so I thought of a succubus. Now I love mythical, supernatural and mythological stuff so I then thought of the succubus.

Thank you everyone for all your input in regards to this nee role of mine :)
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby alex1234321 » Tue Sep 06, 2016 2:01 pm

This is basically an Arsonist that can roleblock. It is too close to the Arsonist. Also, I do not like the concept of a Neutral roleblocker because there are enough roleblockers in the game right now.
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby TazmanianBrit » Tue Sep 06, 2016 2:04 pm

I forgot to mention that all seduced targets that are to be killed automatically visit the succubus that night meaning if a lookout (who isn't seduced) visited it they could see all the dead roles visit them
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby TazmanianBrit » Tue Sep 06, 2016 3:28 pm

Ok I've thought of something that might make it different from arsonist

It roleblocks and kills in the same night so say if they target an investigator, the investigator would be roleblocked then killed meaning thy couldn't do their role

Since its not immune there's a good chance the vig can shoot the succubus making it not too powerful nor too weak or should I just scrap the idea?
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby alex1234321 » Tue Sep 06, 2016 3:57 pm

TazmanianBrit wrote:Ok I've thought of something that might make it different from arsonist

It roleblocks and kills in the same night so say if they target an investigator, the investigator would be roleblocked then killed meaning thy couldn't do their role

Since its not immune there's a good chance the vig can shoot the succubus making it not too powerful nor too weak or should I just scrap the idea?

Making it roleblock and kill would then make it a Serial Killer rehash.

Also, all Neutral Killing roles need to be immune. If they are not, then they would be either underpowered or swingy.
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby TazmanianBrit » Tue Sep 06, 2016 4:38 pm

Ah do you have anything to suggest about what I could do to make it its own thing?

And yeah I guess all neutral killing are immune

As I said i like supernatural/mythical shit (ww and vamp fits with this) so I want to find a way to bring them into the game in a way
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby jadensr » Tue Sep 06, 2016 5:32 pm

It is far too similar to the Arsonist. A buffed Arsonist, really. If you create a Neutral Killing role, avoid it being similar to another killing role. Can't? At least make it different from a another Neutral Killing.

P.S All Neutral Killing roles should be night immune.
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby jadensr » Tue Sep 06, 2016 5:45 pm

It's a buffed Arsonist, which is not necessary. When making a Neutral Killing role, always try to make it different from other killers. Can't? Then at least make it differ from opposing Neutral Killing roles.

P.S: All Neutral Killing roles should be night immune.
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby TazmanianBrit » Wed Sep 07, 2016 1:44 am

I have been thinking of various neutral killing roles but they do act similar to the others.

Every 2 nights thing is too similar to WW

Every night is too similar to SK

Action then kill is basically an arsonist

Limited bullets/alerts is too similar to the towns Vet/Vig

I thought of an NK that kills and roleblocks because it puts more pressure on escort/consort. Speaking from experience, everytime there's an escort claim a town member is like ok then role block me tonight then. And boom, confirmed.

With this it can put a bit of pressure on those types of confirmation
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby Shadow958 » Sat Sep 10, 2016 12:13 am

Bold Text Are written by ME!

TazmanianBrit wrote:Name: Succubus Liking this name so far

Alignment: Neutral Killing

Abilities: Visit people each night to seduce people. All seduced targets will be killed. Too similliar to arsonist
I suggest changing it to: Visit people to seduce people which roleblocks then and after 1 night they are killed you can't seduce another people if you already have 1 person seduced and Seduction kills pierce Night immunity


Attributes:

- Click yourself to kill all seduced targets
- You show up as not suspicious to the Sheriff You show as You are a succubus to the sherrif
- Escorts, Consorts and Role Block immune town members are unaffected by the Succubus

Special Attributes:

- Immune to roleblocks
- Unique
- Unlike all other killing roles, not immune at night. IMMUNE AT NIGHT

Goal: Kill all who oppose you

Win Conditions: Win with Witches and Survivors. Kill everyone else

Investigative Results:

Investigator - Consort, Escort, Transporter or Succubus

Additional Information:

Seducing also role blocks the target

If an already seduced target visits the Succubus, they will be killed. Remove this

If a jailor who has been seduced visits you, they are killed. If they haven't been seduced, you seduce them. remove this

Succubus Prompts

- You have successfully seduced your target
- Your target is immune (if trying to seduce)

Target Prompts

- Somebody occupied your night, you have been roleblocked
- You could not resist the seductive power of the Succubus. You have been killed.
- Somebody tried to seduce you but you are immune


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I feel like neutral needed a sort of role blocking role so it wouldn't be too easy to confirm Escort/Consort so I tried to figure out a way to make it Neutral Evil in a way. I do know that supernatural creatures (e.g vamp and ww) are in game so I thought of a succubus. Now I love mythical, supernatural and mythological stuff so I then thought of the succubus.


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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby TazmanianBrit » Sat Sep 10, 2016 6:27 am

Thanks ill edit it now and tbh I was actually thinking about changing it so its a two night killing only sort of thing so I'm glad to see that it will be better if I do that.

Thank you for your feedback
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby Damafaud » Sat Sep 10, 2016 7:51 am

This is very trivial but...

Consigliere - Your target is a sexy demon. They must be a Succubus.

Can you the word sexy? I mean of course it's a very small change, but BMG went through the problem to change the Escort and Consort feedback.

Can you use beautiful, astonishing, charming, or seductive instead?
(Sexy means sexually appealing)
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby TazmanianBrit » Sat Sep 10, 2016 10:18 am

Yeah ill change it no problem. The only reason I changed it to sexy was because in the lore of a succubus, the succubus is a female demon that is appealing towards men and then she kills them. It was featured in the show torchwood (love that show!)

But yeah no worries, changed it :)
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby 314dragon » Tue Sep 20, 2016 7:48 pm

I mean. what? I dont understad what this is
so like its a vig killing a town member? they wait a day before they die by the succubus?
Im confused please help me on what this is
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby 314dragon » Tue Sep 20, 2016 7:50 pm

I mean. what? I dont understad what this is
so like its a vig killing a town member? they wait a day before they die by the succubus?
Im confused please help me on what this is
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby 314dragon » Thu Sep 22, 2016 6:29 pm

@314dragon

sorry lol glitched and double messaged
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Re: Succubus (Neutral Killing)

Postby Michael22omega » Thu Sep 22, 2016 6:50 pm

I see this as an Serial Killer/Arsonists mix
Generally when you post NK roles you shouldn't make it similar to current ones, the best NK Idea I watch is the electrical on this page
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